An Incomplete Story
It was September 6, 2011. A fair, plump and chubby faced boy along with his mother was looking for a house to buy. In this process ,he went into an apartment as soon as he saw " A flat for sale". Meanwhile his mother was enquiring the details , he came out of the apartment to have a stroll. As soon as he came out, he saw a girl speaking on her phone (with drizzles and smell of sand). At that particular moment, he got stranded with her beautiful eyes. He kept his eyes wide- open even after she left the place until his mother poked him off. That was his love at first sight ever. She has become fantasy to him. As the days passed by, he happened to see her again in Marriage to which she attended with her family. This time it was not on one side, they both have exchanged their looks. On the same day , he came to know that she was relative to him. The boy was literally on cloud nine once he heard that.
As soon as boy completed his class 10 exams, he left to his grand parents home. As few days passed by, he saw her once again. This time not in distance, she came with family to offer an invitation for a function. Now, for the second time ,they have exchanged their looks. But this time it didn't halt with looks. Once she saw him, she pointed her finger out and said" I saw you in the marriage ,right?". He with heavy heart beat and in silence around him said "yes!" With excitement. Meanwhile their elders were talking, the boy and the girl get to know about each other. At the time of leaving, they both exchanged their phone numbers. She was so jovial, friendly and extrovert ; this was the boy's opinion after talking to her. After few months, the boy's phone rang . Yes! Your guess is right. It was the girl. She called him to ask opinion on colleges that she would like to join as their class 10 results were out. Finally, they both joined in Sri Chaitanya college ; but in campus which were exactly opposite to each other . As the girl was good at studies, she joined in top campus. Gradually, as the time passed by, they became too close and they used to meet at a bus stop and commute in the same bus as their both houses were two streets distance to each other. One fine day he proposed her and she accepted it . She used to tell him that she often becomes sick , and he thought it might be fever or something; but he was never concerned about it. Later a twist came, he came to know that she was diagnosed with cancer. He became so depressed. She Left USA to get treatment. After coming back, she introduced her friend "Navya"to this boy. Later, they became good friends too. He helped Navya in many issues. It literally led Navya to develop feelings upon him with in a short span. As a she a person with "sense of consciousness" and ethics ,Navya didn't show her feelings. During their plus two year ,Riya health condition became drastic , she thought she would not survive. So, she asked Navya to take care of him and left to USA. Now Navya developed even stronger feelings upon him. So, finally Navya proposed him .But he rejected her and started avoiding. As the years passed by, he has got some feelings too with the care and love she showered. But they were never got tomeet each other as the boy moved to his grandparents home to complete his graduation over there.
Now, here the biggest twist in the tale came. The girl "Riya" who left to the USAhad come back with the complete cure of cancer. So, Riya came to know that they both developed feelings for each other and she with heavy heart asked both of them to stay as they were. But her friend Navya reluctant and can't accept the reality and asked her to stay with the boy as they had known each other and started being away from them. Now her friend with heart full of feelings and emotions went off.
But, during his final year of graduation,the boy and Riya had small fight over phone as he seemed like he was not too serious about his career. After then, she never called him. After 10 days he went to the girl's home from his grandparents house. But, she wasn't there and her whole family shifted somewhere. After enquiry he came to know that they had already left on or before the day they had fight with each other. He tried to communicate with the people who knew her ; but none knew about her. After fews months , he came to know that her marriage was on the next day. He tried to communicate her with the help of her friends; but she never let him know the reason why she left . He tried it in many ways, but no use. Later ,he came to know that she wasn't sad while getting married and even after too. She is happy now. She definitely did not left with family pressure; cause her father love the boy too much and asked him get married once he gets job.
As of now he still didn't get any answers. The girl left him with out letting him know anything. Navya who loved him started avoiding him when he tried to contact. So, he lost both of them."The one he loved the most ; and the one who loved him the most". He was left deserted. "Did she deceive him?" or something else. He wants to know. But, every question doesn't have answer. But he deserves to know the answer,cause he loved her badly. It ended with a very sad note.
Note: Don't take the names personally. Names are fictional here
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